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tchp
 tchp
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13/05/2011 7:35 am  

Could experiment with a...
Could experiment with a slight roof pitch, as in the Atomic Ranch Magazine logo, if you really wanted to convey the idea of a roof. Although a flat roof is cool too.


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HPau
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13/05/2011 9:00 am  

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yeah the smoke out of the chimney not so good, I thought it was a new housing development and had a touch the ground lightly idea, didn't mean to convey fire or smoke with the scrawl.


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SDR
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13/05/2011 9:16 am  

The logo is
really nice. It takes a sec for it to sink in. Nice !
It's really three colors, isn't it ? Can you "save ink" by making the roof a
tone of the black type ? Or isn't that an issue these days . . . ?
Here's the kind of smoke I like to draw:


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NULL NULL
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13/05/2011 9:39 am  

Smoke out
Yeah, I agree about the smoke. It does make me think of pollution. And it is a bit cartoonish. Okay, here's a version without the smoke and with a thicker roofline and more prominent "chimney".


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NULL NULL
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13/05/2011 9:46 am  

Lowered roof
Lowered the thicker roof a bit and let the d's stick up past the roof a hair. I have a feeling I could keep modifying forever. Unless there are any objections, I think I'll go with this one.


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tktoo
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13/05/2011 10:01 am  

You're a good sport.
2nd to last gets my vote.


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Arthur Sixpence
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13/05/2011 2:11 pm  

The point
In my experience of groups such as yours the more time spent messing with something like the logo the less time is spent on the actual purpose. Pick a logo and then spend the important time on saving those buildings and building appreciation for them.


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NULL NULL
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13/05/2011 3:11 pm  


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whitespike
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13/05/2011 6:22 pm  

I also vote on the second to ...
I also vote on the second to last. The last is too close to the type. Type needs room to breathe. I would stop here, unless (echoing anothers' sentiment) you would like to play with pitch... even a single slope?
And I disagree with stopping just so you don't 'waste time.' Looks like someone doesn't know the importance of branding.


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NULL NULL
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13/05/2011 6:48 pm  

I say
Put a bird on it.


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DudeDah
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13/05/2011 7:51 pm  

LOL!!!!
Woodywood...
nicely played.


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Tyler
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13/05/2011 10:12 pm  

Roof
I really don't like the thicker roof, it is to heavy on the words in the logo, just my feedback.
I lived in Redlands for a couple of years and yes they do need help in the appreciation department.


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NULL NULL
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14/05/2011 1:38 am  

Tynell and Tyler
I do agree about the roof. Here it is back to thin, with more headroom for the text. I think this shall be it.


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NULL NULL
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14/05/2011 1:50 am  

One more for woody


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NULL NULL
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14/05/2011 2:04 am  

Winner!
No contest.


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